more small edits

index.html

@@ -67,11 +67,10 @@
     </div>
     <h2>PROFILE</h2>
     <p>
-      I have successfully led teams ranging from fast-paced kitchen
+      I have successfully led teams from fast-paced kitchen environments
-      environments, construction of 11,000 square foot restaurants to 40 student
+      construction of 11,000 square foot restaurants to 40 student engineering
-      engineering teams. I have a massive portfolio of code in dozens of
+      teams. I have a massive portfolio of code in dozens of languages over a
-      languages over a decade; many of my projects are used by thousands of
+      decade; many of my projects are used by thousands of people a month.
-      people a month.
     </p>
     <h2>EDUCATION</h2>
     <dl>
@@ -82,8 +81,8 @@
       <dd>
         <ul>
           <li>
-            Bachelors of Science in Astronautical Engineering | Minor in
+            Bachelor of Science in Astronautical Engineering | Minor in Computer
-            Computer Science
+            Science
           </li>
           <li>Iceland Study abroad for Mathematics, 2018</li>
           <li>
@@ -92,7 +91,7 @@
               <a href="https://lander-team.gitlab.io/site/"
                 >Astronautics Capstone</a
               >: Controlled Propulsive Landing on Lunar Surface | Spacecraft
-              Attitude Dynamics and Control | Mathematic Optimization Methods |
+              Attitude Dynamics and Control | Mathematics Optimization Methods |
               Machine Learning Directed Study
             </em>
           </li>
@@ -109,7 +108,7 @@
       <ul>
         <li>
           Close collaboration with ERAU Dean of Engineering, ERAU Engineering
-          Faculty and other Engineering Students to conduct primary and
+          Faculty, and other Engineering Students to conduct primary and
           secondary research to prepare for a University Research Institute
           Grant.
         </li>
@@ -119,7 +118,7 @@
           Orbital Debris environment.
         </li>
         <li>
-          Directed study covering Machine Learning methods relevant to
+          Directed study covering Machine Learning methods relevant to the
           characterization of 3D models and reducing highly dimensional data
           down to a low enough level to be applied in other applications.
         </li>
@@ -132,13 +131,13 @@
       <dd>
         <ul>
           <li>
-            Bot that brings stock market information and analysis to group
+            Bot brings stock market information and analysis to group chats,
-            chats, tens of thousands of monthly active users.
+            tens of thousands of monthly active users.
           </li>
           <li>
-            Programmed in Python and uses CI/CD to build, publish and deploy
+            Programmed in Python and uses CI/CD to build, publish, and deploy
-            code to a Kubernetes Cluster to automatically push canary and stable
+            code to a Kubernetes Cluster to push canary and stable releases
-            releases. Uses abstracted asset API to manage multiple types of
+            automatically. Uses abstracted asset API to manage multiple types of
             assets from various data sources.
           </li>
         </ul>
@@ -154,12 +153,12 @@
           </li>
           <li>
             Developed technical documentation to train and onboard incoming
-            staff (100's of employees) to ensure staff represented company
+            staff (hundreds of employees) to ensure staff represented company
             values and followed clear protocols.
           </li>
           <li>
             Worked closely with teams to help promote a healthy workplace
-            culture and promote collaboration and team building.
+            culture, collaboration, and team building.
           </li>
         </ul>
       </dd>
@@ -181,7 +180,7 @@
         Hardware Integration
       </dd>
       <dd>
-        Microprocessor: Python, C++, Web Servers, High Performance Matrix Math,
+        Microprocessor: Python, C++, Web Servers, High-Performance Matrix Math,
         Real-time Object Detection using Deep Learning, CUDA, Raspberry Pi,
         Tegra K1
       </dd>
@@ -197,8 +196,7 @@
       </dd>
       <dt>Computer-Aided Design</dt>
       <dd>
-        Fusion 360, CATIA, 3D Printing, Ultimaker Cura, Drawings, Configuration
+        Fusion 360, CATIA, 3D Printing, Cura, Drawings, Configuration Management
-        Management
       </dd>
       <dt>Office Software</dt>
       <dd>