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     </div>
     <h2>PROFILE</h2>
     <p>
-      I am a Software and Aerospace Engineer working at United Launch Alliance
-      on simulating and modelling of flight systems.
+      Software Engineer with a strong Aerospace Engineering background working
+      at United Launch Alliance on simulation and modeling of next generation
+      flight systems for the Vulcan Centaur Rocket.
     </p>
 
     <h2>ENGINEERING EXPERIENCE</h2>
     <dl>
       <dt>
-        United Launch Alliance | Denver, CO | Software Engineer | May 2022 -
+        Software Engineer | United Launch Alliance | Denver, CO | May 2022 -
         Current
       </dt>
       <dd>
         <ul>
           <li>
-            Main role is simulation and modelling of next generation rocket for
-            certification of flight software and flight hardware.
+            Primary responsibility is writing software for simulating and
+            modeling future versions of a next generation rocket to certify
+            flight software and hardware.
           </li>
           <li>
-            Have made a large impact on pushing company to modernize tools and
-            processes, involving extensive work on modernizing codebase with
-            roots as far back as the 1980's.
+            Combined aerospace and software background to bridge traditional
+            engineering and software engineering teams, resulting in much more
+            advanced models of real flight hardware than was previously
+            produced.
+          </li>
+          <li>
+            Contributed to modernizing tools and processes at the company
+            including extensive work on updating codebase dating back to the
+            1980's.
           </li>
         </ul>
       </dd>
     </dl>
     <dl>
       <dt>
-        Capstone: Spacecraft Detail Design | Prescott, AZ | Technical Lead |
+        Technical Lead | Capstone: Spacecraft Detail Design | Prescott, AZ |
         2021
       </dt>
       <dd>
         <ul>
           <li>
-            Coded from scratch a fully dynamic 6 degree of freedom simulation of
-            a rocket with hardware in the loop to run a simulated rocket landing
-            from a test stand using a real thrust vector control mechanism with
-            a solid rocket motor.
+            Developed a fully dynamic 6 degree of freedom simulation of a rocket
+            from scratch, with hardware in the loop, to simulate a rocket
+            landing from a test stand using a real thrust vector control
+            mechanism and solid rocket motor.
           </li>
           <li>
             LQR Control system designed to throttle and control attitude of
@@ -111,13 +119,16 @@
           </li>
         </ul>
       </dd>
-      <dt>Simple Stock Bots | Phoenix, AZ | Creator | 2018 - 2022</dt>
+      <dt>
+        Creator | Simple Stock Bots | Phoenix, AZ | 2018 - 2022 (now defunct)
+      </dt>
       <dd>
         <ul>
           <li>
-            Bot brings stock market information and analysis to group chats,
-            tens of thousands of monthly active users. Uses abstracted asset API
-            to manage multiple types of assets from various data sources.
+            Developed a stock market bot that delivers information and analysis
+            to group chats with tens of thousands of monthly active users.
+            Utilized an abstracted asset API to manage multiple types of assets
+            from various data sources.
           </li>
           <li>
             Programmed in Python and uses CI/CD to build, publish, and deploy
@@ -140,13 +151,6 @@
             Concentration) | Minor in Computer Science
           </li>
           <li>Iceland Study abroad for Mathematics, 2018</li>
-          <li>
-            Relevant Coursework:
-            <em>
-              Spacecraft Attitude Dynamics and Control | Mathematics
-              Optimization Methods | Machine Learning Directed Study
-            </em>
-          </li>
         </ul>
       </dd>
     </dl>
@@ -158,19 +162,19 @@
     <dd>
       <ul>
         <li>
-          Close collaboration with ERAU Dean of Engineering, ERAU Engineering
-          Faculty, and other Engineering Students to conduct primary and
+          Collaborated closely with ERAU Dean of Engineering, ERAU Engineering
+          Faculty, and other engineering students to conduct primary and
           secondary research.
         </li>
         <li>
-          Implement Machine Learning characterization methods on high-resolution
-          3D scans of high-velocity impact debris to produce a model of the
-          Orbital Debris environment.
+          Implemented Machine Learning characterization methods on
+          high-resolution 3D scans of high-velocity impact debris to produce a
+          model of the Orbital Debris environment.
         </li>
         <li>
-          Directed study covering Machine Learning methods relevant to the
-          characterization of 3D models and reducing highly dimensional data
-          down to a low enough level to be applied in other applications.
+          Completed a directed study on Machine Learning methods for
+          characterization of 3D models and reducing high-dimensional data for
+          other applications.
         </li>
       </ul>
     </dd>
@@ -183,18 +187,16 @@
       <dd>
         <ul>
           <li>
-            Coordinated communications in close partnership with external
-            companies to streamline the expansion of the franchise to three new
-            locations.
+            Coordinated communication with external companies to streamline
+            expansion of franchise to three new locations.
           </li>
           <li>
-            Developed technical documentation to train and onboard incoming
-            staff (hundreds of employees) to ensure staff represented company
-            values and followed clear protocols.
+            Developed technical documentation to train and onboard hundreds of
+            employees, ensuring adherence to company values and protocols.
           </li>
           <li>
-            Worked closely with teams to help promote a healthy workplace
-            culture, collaboration, and team building.
+            Worked closely with teams to promote a positive workplace culture,
+            collaboration, and team building.
           </li>
         </ul>
       </dd>