From b84252ae19ae5078a013b86dab60851093d6bd93 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Anson <anson@ansonbiggs.com>
Date: Fri, 13 Jan 2023 21:20:51 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] grammar

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 resume/index.html | 17 +++++++----------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/resume/index.html b/resume/index.html
index abe62f3..051ffc7 100644
--- a/resume/index.html
+++ b/resume/index.html
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
           </li>
           <li>
             Contributed to modernizing tools and processes at the company
-            including extensive work on updating codebase dating back to the
+            including extensive work on updating a codebase dating back to the
             1980's.
           </li>
         </ul>
@@ -108,9 +108,9 @@
         <ul>
           <li>
             Developed a fully dynamic 6 degree of freedom simulation of a rocket
-            from scratch, with hardware in the loop, to simulate a rocket
-            landing from a test stand using a real thrust vector control
-            mechanism and solid rocket motor.
+            from scratch, with hardware in the loop, to simulate a propulsive
+            landing with real hardware in the loop through a test stand using a
+            real thrust vector control mechanism and a solid rocket motor.
           </li>
           <li>
             LQR Control system designed to throttle and control attitude of
@@ -127,8 +127,8 @@
           <li>
             Developed a stock market bot that delivers information and analysis
             to group chats with tens of thousands of monthly active users.
-            Utilized an abstracted asset API to manage multiple types of assets
-            from various data sources.
+            Utilized a custom developed abstracted asset API to manage multiple
+            types of assets from various data sources.
           </li>
           <li>
             Programmed in Python and uses CI/CD to build, publish, and deploy
@@ -140,10 +140,7 @@
     </dl>
     <h2>EDUCATION</h2>
     <dl>
-      <dt>
-        Embry-Riddle Aeronautical University | Prescott, AZ | Fall 2017 - May
-        2022
-      </dt>
+      <dt>Embry-Riddle Aeronautical University | Prescott, AZ | May 2022</dt>
       <dd>
         <ul>
           <li>